Yes, I'm writing again, I just got a little bit of an Idea of a science fiction story. I decided to write it on-line, sharing the process with my friends and random strangers. Feel free to critique, but don't get your feelings hurt if I don't incorporate your suggestions into the story. I don't have a title yet, I don't really know where it's headed yet, my protagonist hasn't even left his bedroom yet. But here it is so far.
Tim woke to brilliant sunshine, it burst through the window pane, stained gold the opposite wall. He blinked, rubbed sleep from his eyes, and stretched. It was a week day, but he had nothing to do this morning, so he turned over, closed his eyes and indulged himself in the simple joy of a warm bed.
Light, tinted red through his closed eyelids tugged at his consciousness, he frowned, without opening his eyes, snaked an arm from below the covers to swipe across the window fader, turning it opaque, and drifted off to sleep only to be nudged awake by the increasing pressure of his bladder. Finally giving up to the inevitable, he threw off his covers, swiped the window transparent once more, stumbled out of bed and towards the open washroom door.
While still urinating in the toilet, he dragged a rectangle across the deep golden wood of the bathroom’s panelled wall.
“Rec reflect” he mumbled, and the rectangle he had drawn out with his fingers faded to the reflected image of his own face. He momentarily entertained the idea of a goatee, decided to go clean shaved instead, wiped the mirror effect away, and turned towards the shower stall as the toilet flushed.
Tim opened the shower door, stepped into the steamy sudsy mist and sighed heartily, A warm shower makes even a bad morning bearable, today, with no clock ticking away the minutes of his free time, it was pure bliss. Almost too soon, the water and cleanser was replaced by warm breezes, and he leaped out across the washroom, refreshed and invigorated. crossed the bedroom to gaze out the window, It was a real window, a large piece of clear plastic with only controls for polarity and opacity, and looked down on the small but well groomed garden below.
“Outside temp,” he said, gazing down on the rose vines and sun-dappled grass of his mother’s back garden.
“Twenty-four point six,” replied the room. He smiled to himself and slid the window latches aside, lifting the window up half way, breathed in the pleasant scent of roses and fresh cut grass.
“Vivaldi, Springtime”, he sang out, crossing the room to the closet as his room came alive to the thrilling sound of strings, “mirror full length.” A section of the closet face faded to a full length mirror surface, he called up window of shirts and pants, picked a pink cotton polo, a pair of white shorts, and matching white running shoes, turned around, checking out the fit of the ensemble on his reflection, swiped away the pink polo, dialed up a blue and white striped tee, touched the accept tab on the window, picked the clothes out of the drawer as it slid out and dressed.
Tim woke to brilliant sunshine, it burst through the window pane, stained gold the opposite wall. He blinked, rubbed sleep from his eyes, and stretched. It was a week day, but he had nothing to do this morning, so he turned over, closed his eyes and indulged himself in the simple joy of a warm bed.
Light, tinted red through his closed eyelids tugged at his consciousness, he frowned, without opening his eyes, snaked an arm from below the covers to swipe across the window fader, turning it opaque, and drifted off to sleep only to be nudged awake by the increasing pressure of his bladder. Finally giving up to the inevitable, he threw off his covers, swiped the window transparent once more, stumbled out of bed and towards the open washroom door.
While still urinating in the toilet, he dragged a rectangle across the deep golden wood of the bathroom’s panelled wall.
“Rec reflect” he mumbled, and the rectangle he had drawn out with his fingers faded to the reflected image of his own face. He momentarily entertained the idea of a goatee, decided to go clean shaved instead, wiped the mirror effect away, and turned towards the shower stall as the toilet flushed.
Tim opened the shower door, stepped into the steamy sudsy mist and sighed heartily, A warm shower makes even a bad morning bearable, today, with no clock ticking away the minutes of his free time, it was pure bliss. Almost too soon, the water and cleanser was replaced by warm breezes, and he leaped out across the washroom, refreshed and invigorated. crossed the bedroom to gaze out the window, It was a real window, a large piece of clear plastic with only controls for polarity and opacity, and looked down on the small but well groomed garden below.
“Outside temp,” he said, gazing down on the rose vines and sun-dappled grass of his mother’s back garden.
“Twenty-four point six,” replied the room. He smiled to himself and slid the window latches aside, lifting the window up half way, breathed in the pleasant scent of roses and fresh cut grass.
“Vivaldi, Springtime”, he sang out, crossing the room to the closet as his room came alive to the thrilling sound of strings, “mirror full length.” A section of the closet face faded to a full length mirror surface, he called up window of shirts and pants, picked a pink cotton polo, a pair of white shorts, and matching white running shoes, turned around, checking out the fit of the ensemble on his reflection, swiped away the pink polo, dialed up a blue and white striped tee, touched the accept tab on the window, picked the clothes out of the drawer as it slid out and dressed.